Today I began refining my final piece in response to the feedback given and also through my own thoughts and ideas on the design. In order to save time refining the five posters that I had created, I decided to take one of the poster designs and work towards improving it and developing a second dimension to work alongside it. I simplified certain areas of the poster by removing un-needed text and taking away part of the "make sense" identity. I also altered the arrangement of subject matter slightly and added in a photographic image of my ear to replace the illustrative image of an ear. I also imrpoved the wording of text in the lower section of the poster. Once I had refined the poster I began refining my second dimension which would be an iTunes banner for a webpage, working to allow iTunes users to purchase songs and have a percentage of money from the purchase go to WarOnWant.