Today I had a group crit with the whole glass. I was able to look at the work of everyone else on the course and give and recieve opinions. I recieved some strong feedback which consisted of possibly using photographic imagery instead of illustrations to enhance the realism wihtin the posters and relate them more to the viewer. I was also advised about simplifying the design, possibly through the use of removing the lower part of the "make sense" identity that I had created and also by shortening some areas of text to simplify the message. Overall I was very pleased with the crit and found it quite helpful to work towards improving my final piece.